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I Hate Waking Up From An Awesome Dream

Yeah me too. I once saw a lovely dream and wished it never ended and I never wake up. Alas! it ended, I opened my eyes and phew!! gone... :( So I wrote a poem in its memory and its my first poem too :)^^ I dunno whether its good or not so any suggestions will be appreciated :)
So here it goes...

A dream
I saw a dream tonight
A stranger’s face in the light
Smiling at me with beautiful brown eyes
Stubble face and a bit shy
Golden brown unkempt hair
A look so gentle, kind and rare.
Who he was I didn’t knew
In chequered shirt white and blue

Wistful eyes and silent gazes
Silence was his only language
His feelings not known to me
I just wondered who was he

I felt as if he knew me deeply
The way he looked was so lovely
I wished this dream never ends
But slowly reality descends
I opened my eyes and all was gone
And time for me to move on.

----- R. Miru
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sohimirz
That is really great please.
miru11 · 36-40, F
thank you:)