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I Hate Waking Up From An Awesome Dream

Yeah me too. I once saw a lovely dream and wished it never ended and I never wake up. Alas! it ended, I opened my eyes and phew!! gone... :( So I wrote a poem in its memory and its my first poem too :)^^ I dunno whether its good or not so any suggestions will be appreciated :)
So here it goes...

A dream
I saw a dream tonight
A stranger’s face in the light
Smiling at me with beautiful brown eyes
Stubble face and a bit shy
Golden brown unkempt hair
A look so gentle, kind and rare.
Who he was I didn’t knew
In chequered shirt white and blue

Wistful eyes and silent gazes
Silence was his only language
His feelings not known to me
I just wondered who was he

I felt as if he knew me deeply
The way he looked was so lovely
I wished this dream never ends
But slowly reality descends
I opened my eyes and all was gone
And time for me to move on.

----- R. Miru
Camouflage
"So while having lunch I caught him staring at me and he looked away shyly.He looking at me from behind his specs with those shy brown eyes"
Camouflage
you made up the blue and white chequered shirt?
or it came in your dream/
Wondering *
miru11 · 36-40, F
hahaha....
i saw it:)
i sometimes dream in color :)
Camouflage
that is cool,,i never dreamt in colour,,,or i could never remember it,,idk
whitesunshine87
whitesunshine87
Nice to meet you too.
miru11 · 36-40, F
:)
whitesunshine87
:-)
sohimirz
That is really great please.
miru11 · 36-40, F
thank you:)
DropsOfRain
It's beautiful! ^^
miru11 · 36-40, F
thank you :)^^
s860643
miru11 · 36-40, F
thank you:)

 
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