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FuzeBar · 26-30, M
[ABAB}A thousand splintered fragments refracting wond'rous dances
FuzeBar · 26-30, M
And if words history's harlots be
What can be said of poetry?
A brutal swing by dead'ning Lust?
Or deft stroke of Aphrodite?
What can be said of poetry?
A brutal swing by dead'ning Lust?
Or deft stroke of Aphrodite?
@FuzeBar I'll throw this in there cause it is my classic example of quatrain and close to my heart. I hope you don't mind the divine reference.
[b][c=#003BB2]The Senses.[/c][/b]
[b]Sight, the colored canvas's in my mind
the sun the sea the land beneath
every thing upon which you've shined
your revealing light becomes belief
touch, the silent message born of love
another gift from life to life
to know the softness of the skin
to know the sharpness of the knife
Sound, the music of reality
the beating universal drum
Life's continuing harsh symphony
It's never ceasing gentle hum
taste, the message from the tongue to brain
the bitter warning not to eat
both pleasure or a type of pain
the polarity of sour sweet
Smell, the priceless talent of the nose
giving flavor to the air
wherewith we appreciate the rose
and separate the foul and fair
If we as all humanity
were simply accidents of time
what use would all these treasures be
to know both wretched and sublime
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[b][c=#003BB2]The Senses.[/c][/b]
[b]Sight, the colored canvas's in my mind
the sun the sea the land beneath
every thing upon which you've shined
your revealing light becomes belief
touch, the silent message born of love
another gift from life to life
to know the softness of the skin
to know the sharpness of the knife
Sound, the music of reality
the beating universal drum
Life's continuing harsh symphony
It's never ceasing gentle hum
taste, the message from the tongue to brain
the bitter warning not to eat
both pleasure or a type of pain
the polarity of sour sweet
Smell, the priceless talent of the nose
giving flavor to the air
wherewith we appreciate the rose
and separate the foul and fair
If we as all humanity
were simply accidents of time
what use would all these treasures be
to know both wretched and sublime
[/b]
FuzeBar · 26-30, M
Fantastic. I love the form of it, almost like a persuasive essay, each part named and remarked upon, tying into the conclusion at the end. And the existential question is something I've been pondering a lot lately. Why Beauty? Where does it fit into the Absurd existence and the brutal crucible of biological evolution? Definitely a key question for an artist to ask and it's worded beautifully here.