What do you think of this poem? Is there anything that can be changed to make it better?
Impossible, unfeasible
Words like this so famous
Nobody, no one
Seems to be ambitious
Stress, worries
They're holding us back
Depression, anxiety
We're under attack
Gifts, love
These are given us
Hidden, snuffed
Practically spirit-less
Mistakes,blunders
Constantly on playback
Satan,fear
Our faith is being hijacked.
Hazy, myopic
We have now lost our focus
Wanderer, lost
Blinded by sinfulness
Miracles, grace
They take us aback
Unbelief,wonder
As our brains we rack
Trust, sacrifice
Let go of our flesh
Change, repent
Give him our best
Seek, grow
Don't let satan distract
Conscious, aware
So you won't be Sidetracked
God,the king
He's the one who made us
Perfect, righteous
Now with him we're blameless
Attainable, accesible
We can now giveback
Declare, Rise up
Make a comeback
Because with God
We are truly limitless!
Words like this so famous
Nobody, no one
Seems to be ambitious
Stress, worries
They're holding us back
Depression, anxiety
We're under attack
Gifts, love
These are given us
Hidden, snuffed
Practically spirit-less
Mistakes,blunders
Constantly on playback
Satan,fear
Our faith is being hijacked.
Hazy, myopic
We have now lost our focus
Wanderer, lost
Blinded by sinfulness
Miracles, grace
They take us aback
Unbelief,wonder
As our brains we rack
Trust, sacrifice
Let go of our flesh
Change, repent
Give him our best
Seek, grow
Don't let satan distract
Conscious, aware
So you won't be Sidetracked
God,the king
He's the one who made us
Perfect, righteous
Now with him we're blameless
Attainable, accesible
We can now giveback
Declare, Rise up
Make a comeback
Because with God
We are truly limitless!