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What do you think of this poem? Is there anything that can be changed to make it better?

Impossible, unfeasible
Words like this so famous
Nobody, no one
Seems to be ambitious

Stress, worries
They're holding us back
Depression, anxiety
We're under attack

Gifts, love
These are given us
Hidden, snuffed
Practically spirit-less

Mistakes,blunders
Constantly on playback
Satan,fear
Our faith is being hijacked.

Hazy, myopic
We have now lost our focus
Wanderer, lost
Blinded by sinfulness

Miracles, grace
They take us aback
Unbelief,wonder
As our brains we rack

Trust, sacrifice
Let go of our flesh
Change, repent
Give him our best

Seek, grow
Don't let satan distract
Conscious, aware
So you won't be Sidetracked

God,the king
He's the one who made us
Perfect, righteous
Now with him we're blameless

Attainable, accesible
We can now giveback
Declare, Rise up
Make a comeback

Because with God
We are truly limitless!
Umile · 41-45, F
I know it's a religious poem, but that can be a real good rap verse with a sick beat. 👌
Acadiaisgone · 22-25, F
I love this, nice rhythm to it.

 
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