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Here is part of a poem I wrote a while back .This is not the complete version.
Wounded Worriers
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Wounded warriors are prepared to fight
Even in their darkest times,
they will generate their own light
illustrate a luminous path
and formulate an aftermath.
Wounded warriors will rise
Even when being dragged down , turned down ,shaken ,aching and quaking
A warrior never surrenders
For we are our own defenders.

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Blessedsoul81 · 41-45, C

This Miss, perfectly and accurate summarizes all we are as human beings and waht e mustr do. People! behold! we have a real poet in our midst!

Pureblossom · 22-25, F

Why thank you kind sir.I wasn't sure , I thought maybe I made it sound a bit corny .

Blessedsoul81 · 41-45, C

@Pureblossom: I think its powerful, written with conviction and the heart of a realist. Cornyness wouldnt be in any of it at all.

Blessedsoul81 · 41-45, C

@Pureblossom: @Pureblossom: May I add you> It would be an honour to keep up to date with your work. Please do keep the poetry coming. In the sometimes cesspit of SW this sort of thing needs to be here. It proverbially 'cleans the toilet bowl'. <3

Serenitree · F

Good writing. May we see the finished version please?

Nov. 30/16
5:55 pm

Pureblossom · 22-25, F

Thank you .If you would like to see more in a couple weeks ill will be posting a link where you can buy my full completed poetry collection books.

Serenitree · F

@Pureblossom: good. Nice that you have a collection of them. I just have mine on papers in a box.

Nov. 30/16
6:05 pm

Oster1 · M

I liked that and the subject matter. You are very kind, sweet and a very talented poet:)

Pureblossom · 22-25, F

Thank you .

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