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Here is part of a poem I wrote a while back .This is not the complete version.
Wounded Worriers
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Wounded warriors are prepared to fight
Even in their darkest times,
they will generate their own light
illustrate a luminous path
and formulate an aftermath.
Wounded warriors will rise
Even when being dragged down , turned down ,shaken ,aching and quaking
A warrior never surrenders
For we are our own defenders.