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Is the romance era gone? Yes, it is.

clouds, chased by the wind
are like dreams
to the moon
(haiku)
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Lostpoet · M
That's nice, but not a haiku.
elafina · 36-40, F
@Lostpoet it's not supposed to appear like one sentence..but if you say so ☺️
Lostpoet · M
@elafina What? I just meant the structure isn't a haiku it doesn't follow these rules.

There are only three lines, totaling 17 syllables.
The first line is 5 syllables.
The second line is 7 syllables.
The third line is 5 syllables like the first