Tommmhm · 26-30, M
I like how you write especially when you described the people.
Just the end about love and so. It was hard to read for me.
Because of a breakup
Just the end about love and so. It was hard to read for me.
Because of a breakup

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@Tommmhm I am sorry it was hard for you, I hope you are okay.
LordSillio · 36-40, M
I love the way you described each one of the fibre of that particular moment. You take me into that moment as if I took a seat next to you in that train while listening to your heart when it whispers. Everything seems stop,and it is only you and that moment on play.. I believe others must have spoken about their empathy towards you..I think they have said enough everything that I need to..
SagePoet · 70-79, M
wonderful piece about love lost, being separate, wanting, desire, remembering what you loved about him. Forgiveness, making changes, missing him, wanting him. I love the piece so much feeling, so much being so real. Thanks for sharing.
Igwmh01 · 61-69, C
Beautiful and vivid to the heart. Like paint, its a colorful picture of the war between the heart and brain. Very well written. Thank you.

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@Igwmh01 thank you for reading... it is an ongoing war..
Igwmh01 · 61-69, C
Yeah, just wrote about that war BTW. You made me think
masterofyou · 70-79, M
"I don’t like catching the train"
This is the most heart filling story of what love is.. You are a magnificent writer you write from the heart not many can...
This is the most heart filling story of what love is.. You are a magnificent writer you write from the heart not many can...

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This is beautiful, hope you find one soon.

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@SW-User thank you for reading, and I did ☺
masterofyou · 70-79, M
So beautiful that is all I can say right now...
Starbursteffect · 51-55, F
:( I know what you're talking about

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@Starbursteffect I hope things get better for you.
yeronlyman · 51-55, M
The soundtracks to our lives :(
bookerdana · M
I loved reading this💝
Quimliqer · 70-79, M
Deep....
melbeacher · 61-69, M
How long were you separated ?