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Girl Harry Potter, antagonistic Blaise Zabini, thoughts?

"The Sorting Ceremony will take place in a few minutes in front of the rest of the school. I suggest you all smarten yourselves up as much as you can while you are waiting." Her eyes lingered for a moment on Neville's cloak, which was fastened under his left ear, and on Ron's smudged nose. Dove tried to tame her hair, looking to Draco for help.
“You look fine, Dove.” He told her. “Mother wouldn’t have let you on the train if you didn’t.”
“But, Dray, please.” He huffed and motioned for her to turn around, combing his hands through her hair, braiding it back, and looping it so it would stay in place. She went to thank him but was interrupted by a mocking laugh behind them. The three, and everyone else, turned around to see a dark-skinned boy with a cruel smirk crowded by two chubby ones with unintelligent faces.
“Did your mummy teach you that, Malfoy?” Draco didn’t turn red, but his cheeks tinged just the slightest pink which was more than Dove had seen on him.
“Zabini, are they letting just anyone attend Hogwarts these days? I might have to reconsider my academic options.”
“You think you’re so clever, don’t you? And what? Now you’re in crowd with the Chosen One? That’s a complete turn from the old days of the Malfoy line, isn’t it?” He approached Dove and held out his hand to shake. “Blaise Zabini, a pleasure to meet you.”
She glanced down at his hand and back up with a stormy face that would have made Draco or Ron stop to consider their actions. “I wish I could say the same.”
Zabini didn’t look upset, but instead smirked derisively. “One day you will come to regret that decision. Until then, Potter.”
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TheCoolestCat · 31-35, M
yawn.... boooring
AllISeeAreStars · 26-30, F
You know, that's not very constructive.
TheCoolestCat · 31-35, M
so, it took you ages to write that crap and now no-one is going to read it, what a waste of time eh?
AllISeeAreStars · 26-30, F
Why do you think it took me ages? And actually, a lot of people are liking it. What is the purpose of your commenting on a post you obviously don't like? Are you that bored?
TheCoolestCat · 31-35, M
well it clearly took more than 2 seconds, which is ages...... i dont see any comments or hearts from people that liked it either, stop deluding yourself youre a shit writer and youll always be a shit writer... and yea im pretty bored atm
AllISeeAreStars · 26-30, F
I love how you actually think I'm not posting on a fanfiction site where I do have comments and favorites on it. I can respect you don't like it, and that you think I suck. Really. You are more than welcome to think what you like.
TheCoolestCat · 31-35, M
stop lying ,, comments and readers my ass,,,, you posted a question 5 days ago saying that youve had ZERO readers so far... i doubt much has changed in 5 days
AllISeeAreStars · 26-30, F
You really like to try upsetting people don't you? Is that your hobby? Good luck with that and wherever it goes.
TheCoolestCat · 31-35, M
it obviously worked a bit..... good job i think
AllISeeAreStars · 26-30, F
If it had upset me all that much there would be more choice words in the past few comments.
TheCoolestCat · 31-35, M
youre starting to bore me now just like your shitty boring story... good luck being a failure
AllISeeAreStars · 26-30, F
Good luck being rude and sarcastic, I hope you step on a Lego. Or a d4.
Fernie · F
@ElaraxSkye: I have no idea what this fool said to you...ignore him...I'm assuming it's a him...they ARE the rudest here more often than not. I enjoyed reading this very much...being a Potter freak
AllISeeAreStars · 26-30, F
@Fernie: Thank you. I was actually quite proud of it at the time.
Fernie · F
@ElaraxSkye: Very well done! You should be proud