would you read my first draft of the novel I'm writing?
I kinda want to put at least the first couple of chapters from the book im writing to be posted here to have some sort of feedback regarding my plot and writinf style
36-40, M
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Does it have Mexican cartel and Japanese yakuza with dildos in it?
Dancingxghost · 36-40, M
@SW-User it has depiction of the yakuza but not in the traditional way as regarding for dildos I wouldn't know how to put them in the book