I Write Poetry

And as these blasphemed words fall from disgraced lips upon blessed ears, anguish and sorrow swell devouring every morsel of light. The morning sun has never been so sorely missed as in these most desparate of hours.

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SW-User

This is nice, thank you for sharing it

IsaiahIMS · 26-30, M

lovely work

Hamidmeh · 36-40, M

For which person

MagentaMentality · 31-35, F

@Hamidmeh: For whomever feels it is for them.

hlpflwthat · M

Nice.

I'm picturing a walk of shame.

MagentaMentality · 31-35, F

@hlpflwthat: Thanks. This was actually from my first breakup at 16. He slept with someone because he didn't want to wait for me to be ready. To get over the hurt, I imagined how ashamed he must feel. And this is what my overly dramatic 16 year old self came up with.

hlpflwthat · M

Your overly dramatic self was a better writer at 16 than most ever become.

So it was better - but not better - than the walk of shame ;)

MagentaMentality · 31-35, F

@hlpflwthat: I suppose so. Thank you.

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