I go first, you go second..

The sweet abyss
I sorely miss
Slipping quickly
I don't resist
A sickly comfort
Home sweet home
A piercing truth
Down to bone
Exposed depths
Expanding still.......

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Rayan1990 · 31-35, M

Your words feel like a descent into something raw and honest, painful, yet familiar. There's beauty in how you’ve captured that ‘sickly comfort’... it lingers. I felt each line like a quiet echo in the dark. Thank you for sharing something so deep.

XcookiexbakerX · 31-35, F

@Rayan1990 thank you, we're connected even we think we aren't 😌

Rayan1990 · 31-35, M

@XcookiexbakerX Sometimes souls recognize each other in silence before words ever catch up. I felt that connection in your lines too... like a thread between shadows.

XcookiexbakerX · 31-35, F

@Rayan1990 being seen is the greatest gift, thank you!

Rayan1990 · 31-35, M

@XcookiexbakerX It means a lot to hear that. Sometimes just being seen gently is all we need and I’m really glad my words reached you that way.

XcookiexbakerX · 31-35, F

@Rayan1990 especially when the world is so rough, your words are effortlessly genuine and I appreciate that very much.

Rayan1990 · 31-35, M

@XcookiexbakerX That means more than I can say. In a world that can be so loud and unkind, it feels good just to share something real, thank you for receiving it so gently.