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I Write Poetry

Wednesday

Gloomy Wednesday here;
all aches and feeling my age.
It is my rain song

Perhaps I should call.
It has been a little time
between then and now.

My mind is blank here
all syllables and structure
keep eluding me.

The wet lands smiling
the green recovers quickly
from yesterday's frost.

Discuss the weather?
See how I am sunk so low?
Good thing there's no booze.
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SW-User
Sometimes, when things end there is not much left to say, but we still wish to reach out, but don't know how.
SW-User
I love your use of the Haiku form for this poem. It keeps the message simple, yet it shows depth.
sablefin · 46-50, F
Ha ha...so simple and cute. I love it. You have a way with words.
thanks. People who write poetry usually have other bad habits! Some of my stuff makes me need to wash my hands afterwards.
Those are all 5-7-5's.
berangere · 80-89, F

 
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