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Briar hearts


The fragile frail breaks of hearts,
like leaves on autumn ground,

A stillness to the silence,
when they cease to beat or pound,

The little brittle hearts,
that grew from teary brine,

Holding pains within their roots,
that bleed out to the vine,

They held impassioned fires,
that would consume and burn them out,

Now mere shadows of their former selves,
a mess of scars and doubt,

Former floweret so picturesque,
now just a hollow empty rind,

Each once bore fruit of a dream,
that fate sought fit to decline,

It didn't happen all at once,
slowly over time the hope had wilted,

With each lie and misplaced trust,
from each soul by whom they were jilted,

Yet let not your own growth cease,
or emotions turn to stone,

Whether you rend the heart of another,
or are trying to mend your own,

We are each monsters,
with chaos, fangs, and claws,

Nurturing our traumatized hearts,
bursting with perfect flaws,

If you ever feel all is lost,
and your spirit hangs by a string,

I warn you do not spurn your blossoms husk,
For it will bloom again come spring.
Umile · 41-45, F
Your writing is stunningly beautiful.

Your use of words and timing are perfect.

I wish I could write like you.
lovingdead · 31-35, M
@Umile Ita been a long while since I wrote like that, but thank you
hippyjoe1955 · 61-69, M
Where I come from a briar is a national sporting event. A Canadian excuse to get drunk.
lovingdead · 31-35, M
@hippyjoe1955 in Wisconsin that's called sunday
This brought tears to my eyes.

Thank you for sharing.

Excellent writing. Well done.

🤗 ..
lovingdead · 31-35, M
@PuppetOnStrings thanks, and sorry for inducing a tear
SW-User
This is really moving.
Your image choice is fantastic too.
Bravo.
lovingdead · 31-35, M
@SW-User computer generated. I explained a rough prompt concept and just kept tweaking till I found one I liked

 
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