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Kaleidoscope

Broken hearts and promises,
Pain and scars abound,
Akin to colored leaves,
Scattered upon the autumn ground,
Healing will slowly happen,
For each piece in our collection,
As we arrange them into a mosaic,
Made of poetic retrospection.
lovingdead · 31-35, M
@MoonlightLullaby i dont know about "returned" but it did at least stop by for a visit.

and i vote just write, even if it goes nowhere. for each one could maybe be one of those little fragmented pieces of a greater whole.

write about the knotted mess inside your head, drought of inspiration.
MoonlightLullaby · 41-45, F
@lovingdead I have done the latter suggestion and produced some worthy poetry and prose. I've invested some time into writing, but my problem is, if it's not "my syntax", it isn't worthy. My last substantial pieces of have been wiped from this profile, but I've thought about returning a few of them.
lovingdead · 31-35, M
@MoonlightLullaby that's fair. Every poet has a unique rhythm, the metronome of our soul, somehow keeping time with each pump of the heart, every breath, all the years, laughs, and heartbreak.

I hope thing since back up for you soon
MoonlightLullaby · 41-45, F
Congrats. It looks like the muse returned. I love the assonance you found with....
"into our collection" and "poetic retrospection"😉

....... if only my pretty metaphors & assonance would unravel in my mind again
Choosethename · 41-45, F
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Umile · 41-45, F

 
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