Do you have a favourite poem? Have you written one yourself?

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This is not my favourite, but the last one I wrote...

It is called one thousand and one nights...

[b]One thousand and one nights
dreaming of you in the melancholy of desire
hoping for an eternal night, no dawn to arrive

One thousand and one kisses
sliding on your skin in the fever of temptation

One thousand and one fantasies
inhaling your dreamy masculine scent
whispering your name in your ears

One thousand and one desires
dreaming of dreaming of you with my face resting on your chest,

One thousand and one tears
reminding me of the story that never belonged to me

One thousand and one silent songs spreading the sorrow of us aparting[/b]

Montanaman · M

@Soossie That's most excellent. It touches me 😔🥰💞🌹

Soossie

@Montanaman

Thank you... hearing this from you means a lot.. 🤗🤗

SweetMae · 70-79, F

@Soossie That is beautiful and full of emotion.

Soossie

@SweetMae

Thank you Queen Mae..😘💞💞

Abstraction · 61-69, M

@Soossie That's beautiful. You can write. I don't say that to many people.

I did to this guy: @Montanaman

SweetMae · 70-79, F

@Soossie 😘💕

Soossie

@Abstraction

Thank you very much...

Montanaman is a very good poet.. 🤗🤗🙏🙏

Yulianna · 22-25, F

@Soossie 🤗 thank you.

Abstraction · 61-69, M

@Soossie Poetry evokes far more than it says, but says it lyrically, so that the words fall like honey. And you feel it, you sense it, you recognise in yourself what was in the soul of the poet. That's what you did here.

Soossie

@Yulianna

Thank you for reading sweet lady...🤗🌷

Yulianna · 22-25, F

@Soossie 🤗 i enjoy it... as a writer i appreciate what you have done. 🌻

Soossie

@Abstraction

Thank you..

I dont consider myself a poet... I just try to register my emotions of the unique moments ....

I write them in Farsi and whenever I feel that they are translatable with less feelings getting lost in translation, I turn them into English (with my limited English)...

Thank you again for your kind words..🙏

Soossie

@Yulianna

Thank you.. I need to read more of yours... 😘🤗💞

Yulianna · 22-25, F

@Soossie maybe i should try to gather links all into one post... that would make it easier. 🤗

Abstraction · 61-69, M

@Soossie Farsi - I think it must be a beautifully expressive language? I almost listed the English translation of the Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam, as it's one of my favourites. I can be lost inside it. The imagery is second to none. Have you read the English and the Farsi and how would you compare them?