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Montanaman · M
Most recent one written.
Only got 4 views and two hearts...
But that's not what really matters.
Desire Turns To Dust-
Have you ever felt that feeling,
When desire turns to dust
A summer's rain,
That lies to you
The heat of reality leaves you Thirsty with lust.
Choking on promises,
Your empty eyes can't possibility understand
That you're just like all the rest,
All jazz and whiskey
Poker face and sparkling eyes,
You can't believe you fell for his lies.
That's when desire turns to dust.
-Kelly.
Only got 4 views and two hearts...
But that's not what really matters.
Desire Turns To Dust-
Have you ever felt that feeling,
When desire turns to dust
A summer's rain,
That lies to you
The heat of reality leaves you Thirsty with lust.
Choking on promises,
Your empty eyes can't possibility understand
That you're just like all the rest,
All jazz and whiskey
Poker face and sparkling eyes,
You can't believe you fell for his lies.
That's when desire turns to dust.
-Kelly.
Abstraction · 61-69, M
@Montanaman It's good. That's Australian understatement.
Montanaman · M
@Soossie Thank you 😊💞🌹
The person I wrote it for called it Nasty.
After searching my heart for the words,
My soul for the feeling intense...
She called it Nasty and removed me from her friends list and blocked me from adding again...
I deleted my account promptly.
After 24 hours, I told myself, to hell with her.
And came back.
I wish things like that didn't bother me, but I wear my heart on my sleeve. 😔🤗🥰
The person I wrote it for called it Nasty.
After searching my heart for the words,
My soul for the feeling intense...
She called it Nasty and removed me from her friends list and blocked me from adding again...
I deleted my account promptly.
After 24 hours, I told myself, to hell with her.
And came back.
I wish things like that didn't bother me, but I wear my heart on my sleeve. 😔🤗🥰
Montanaman · M
@Abstraction thank you 😊👍🤗
SW-User
@Montanaman It's a beautiful poem, Montanaman. Continue wearing your heart on your sleeve, friend.
Montanaman · M
bijouxbroussard · F
@Montanaman It’s beautiful. I’m astonished that anyone wouldn’t be honored to be its subject. 🙁
I’m glad you didn’t stay away.
I’m glad you didn’t stay away.
Montanaman · M
@bijouxbroussard Thank you very much. 👍🤗🌹