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The Briny Balm

I went to the sea to heal my heart.
I found a balm
in the sighing waves,

the soothing salty air.

She's a fickle lover; It's often said
by sailors and seaman,
and other lost souls
whose songs become the wailing wind.

The mad man has the saddest laugh;
maniacal and strange,
with tears in his eyes,
pleading for lost love's return.

I'll climb the rigging and heave the line
perhaps in time
I'll forget why I came,
and only curse the northerly wind.

Three points off the starboard bow
I see her walking
on the waves.
My heart still has far to go.

I've come to laugh that burnt tragic laugh
of men who stay
too long at sea
and now I've forgotten why I came.

[i]The poem is an anachronism but it's true[/i]. ©
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bookerdana · M
You have a love of nature..I think it's only an anachronism if you have things from different times such as if you got to the beach..I could be wrong
Oberon1 · 61-69, M
@bookerdana as far as I know an anachronism is simply something old fashion in modern times.
bookerdana · M
@Oberon1 In other words ,me!!😅 You KNEW I'd have to check.."Anachronism Definition

Generally, they are considered errors that occur due to lack of research. For example, if a painter paints a portrait of Aristotle, and shows him wearing a wrist watch, it would be an example of anachronism, as we are all aware that wristwatches did not exist during Aristotle's time.

anyway I liked your poem..Ever read the Windhover By Gerald Manly Hopkins..interesting alliterative poem
CantExplain · 61-69, M
@Oberon1 or visa versa - Shakespeare had a lock chiming for Caesar’s death.
Oberon1 · 61-69, M
@CantExplain Yeah, but this definition is fair!
[b]a thing belonging or appropriate to a period other than that in which it exists, especially a thing that is conspicuously old-fashioned.[/b]
bookerdana · M
@bookerdana Anyway it's probably better for atmosphere to have an ship with rigging and sails
Oberon1 · 61-69, M
@CantExplain @bookerdana {Part of my punishment is that it takes forever for me to post anything.........sorry
bookerdana · M
@Oberon1 Wow,Is it b/c they check it? Hopefully you'll be able to join this community of honorable,virtuous members*sarcasm*