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An Awakening

On a random morning
in chaotic form;
I happened to glance at the mirror;
to see my soulless spun eyes
painted day glow dead upon my face.

Too much black on plastic blue;
floating on yellow brownish white.
The guilt was toxic,
but the shame brought me to a place
of repentance and change.

I will take that mirror to my grave.
Meanwhile I clean my blood.
I occupy my time with good music,
and hard work.
Redemption.
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ThoughtGuy · 26-30, M
I think I once saw a B movie like this.
Oberon1 · 61-69, M
@ThoughtGuy Have you ever seen "The Toxic Avenger"? I like those movies that are so bad, they're hilarious. Birdemic is another one.
ThoughtGuy · 26-30, M
@Oberon1 Haven't seen it, but I've met the people who made it.
Fun bunch.
Also check out Poultrygeist: night of the chicken dead.
Oberon1 · 61-69, M
@ThoughtGuy As far as the writing is concerned, it can range from 'pedestrian and uninspired' or outright ridiculous to passable. It's just something I do, and it keeps me from going into 'keyboard warrior' mode.
ThoughtGuy · 26-30, M
@Oberon1 Best way to use that energy.
I wish more would do the same.
bookerdana · M
@Oberon1 you do more than passable,and the uninspired leads to inspired..creation
ThoughtGuy · 26-30, M
@bookerdana The best writing, is born from a thousand failed ideas.
Oberon1 · 61-69, M
@bookerdana Ahh........Thank you brother! I'm glad you let me have a Mulligan. I missed ya, and regretted my hard nosed stance. Yeah.....my email is still the same one.
bookerdana · M
@Oberon1 I haven't heard the word mulligan in years🤣 Sometimes the word random drives me nuts,though its here to stay but you do have a gift for wordplay....do you remember the time you got hacked and the hackers sent all your contacts a "present"?
Seems like a million years ago!
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