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I Write Poetry

To and fro,
This back and forth feeling,
I sink further down inside.
How much longer can I endure?
How much further do I have?
Oh, there's a light
Light?
Stoplight.
Great...
Time to be lonely and sad some more
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unknownpoetx · 36-40, M
this is why some books are burnt
Montanaman · M
@unknownpoetx please explain?🤔
unknownpoetx · 36-40, M
@Montanaman it's shit.
Montanaman · M
@unknownpoetx oh, ok. You are SW's literature critic.
Critic's opinions are shit.
Kirby · 26-30, F
Um, in all fairness. I really wasn't trying. I was more just trying to vent. I really don't care if people like it or not.
unknownpoetx · 36-40, M
@Montanaman I'm a poet. not a critic. also, mind your fucking business.
unknownpoetx · 36-40, M
@Kirby proceed
Montanaman · M
@unknownpoetx as a poet myself, I do not, and cannot judge others feelings, written in word. I mean, it expresses a feeling, an emotion felt. If I can relate to that expression, that feeling, then the writer has done their job.

Who are We, to become critics?
Kirby · 26-30, F
Clearly, it's all a matter of opinion. It's okay for everyone to have there own opinion. Montana clearly likes it. Unknown very much dislikes it. I am indifferent. I'm not thrilled with how it turned out, but I'm not angry by it either.
Montanaman · M
@Kirby agreed to disagree. 👍
Care to critique anything I've written?
I got my big boy panties on. 😏
Kirby · 26-30, F
@Montanaman maybe in a bit. I going to be getting off here soon.
Montanaman · M
@Kirby 👍😊anytime.😏
Montanaman · M
@Kirby if you do have the time, i suggest starting at the very last page of my posts, working backwards. My best stuff, in the back.
But no worries.👍😎