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I Write Poetry

[b]No Use Crying
Over
Spilled
Milk.[/b]


Words
spilled
from pen to paper.
Dripping with passion,
undying...
and dreams
broken.
Phrase by phrase,
arching the flood
of emotions
into letters.
Side by side,
to express
feelings
that actually
used to mean ...

Something.



*My writing challenge contribution *
https://similarworlds.com/3724831-I-Challenge-You-to-Challenge-Me-to-Write/2472234-WRITERS-WEEKLY-CHALLENGE-WEEK-OF-JANUARY-31-2019?rid=28326991
BexEyes · 46-50, F
Ohhhh honey...hugs.
That is both sad and poignant. I love how you did this short but to the point with no room (or time) for misinterpreting.

You excel so greatly when you write-and write like this.

Your heartfelt (and oft bitter) writings on EP were one of the things that drew me to you then. Well, that and someone told me you were "buff" and I still do not know what that means. lol
SW-User
Ohhhhh...I like this a lot! The ending hits hard and is painful, but that's because it's so relatable. Just excellent!
JaggedLittlePill · 41-45, F
@SW-User Thank you!
I can appreciate this, at times I write with a fountain pen in a journal, I know what it feels like to have “Words spilled from pen to paper.”

Very well written!
HeavenBesideYou · 56-60, F
I love it Pill. Thanks for joining us in the challenge. I hope you continue to play. 🤗💗
Amazing. Very nicely done.
JaggedLittlePill · 41-45, F
@PrivateHell thank you
@JaggedLittlePill you're welcome.
UndeadPrivateer · 31-35, M
Very well written piece.
JaggedLittlePill · 41-45, F
@UndeadPrivateer 🤗 Thanks.
UndeadPrivateer · 31-35, M
Dayvee65 · M
Your spilt ink was not wasted. Lovely writing. 🙂
thoughts that sing
like a caged bird,
whose voice escapes
free to the sky
@JaggedLittlePill I too, suffer the heartbreak of Poetry
JaggedLittlePill · 41-45, F
@SatyrService I have a hard time reading them after.
@JaggedLittlePill proof, that you are being true to your muse.
if it catches you throat?, it is deeply true
Fungirlmmm · 51-55
Wow. That is so sad. I love it because it grabbed my heart by the throat.
JaggedLittlePill · 41-45, F
@Fungirlmmm This is the first real thing I have written creatively in ages.

Thanks for the prompt.
Fungirlmmm · 51-55
@JaggedLittlePill You're welcome. You are welcome any time. We do it every week. I take suggestions on PM but use a randomizer to spit words out. It has been a lot of fun so far.
Peaches · F
I love this, 😔💓so bittersweet.💙🥀
JaggedLittlePill · 41-45, F
@Peachesthank you!
SW-User
Ooooh. Nice 😛
NudasPriest · 46-50, M
It is so good to see you writing like this, exercising your skill ... despite the sadness, I'm glad you did.

 
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