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I Write Poetry

My contribution to this: https://similarworlds.com/3724831-I-Challenge-You-to-Challenge-Me-to-Write/2458088-WRITERS-WEEKLY-CHALLENGE-WEEK-OF-JANUARY-24-2019?rid=28115409



Aroused


The scent of her arousal
Awakens him with immediate
Desire and need.

His hunger drives him along,
Marching toward the southern
Lands waiting for him to
Divide and conquer.


--- HughManatee
HeavenBesideYou · 56-60, F
That’s wonderful imagery. Very well done.

I keep thinking I hope his gun doesn’t go off half cocked. Lol.
HughManatee · 61-69, M
@HeavenBesideYou

Well, perhaps I need to amend my previous remark...
HeavenBesideYou · 56-60, F
@HughManatee Uh huh... I figured. Now you can just hope you’re not shooting blanks. Lol
HughManatee · 61-69, M
@HeavenBesideYou

Well, they are .44 caliber
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
Nicely done. I like the subtlety of the words and the implied meaning. 😎

I think you're supposed to use at least four of the words though... ;)
HughManatee · 61-69, M
@ChampagneOnIce

I'll get 'round to the others 😉
diablesse · 56-60, F
Nicely done Monsieur.
HughManatee · 61-69, M
@diablesse

My thanks, Madame

 
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