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I Write Poetry

Aguas.

Porque brindé con aguas saladas
que se cayeron de los ojos y los años
guardo mi sed de las aguas dulces
del manantial de los tuyos.

Ojalá no reme más un día
sobre corrientes que bajan.

Y sea llegue a las viñas mismas
para la hora del brindis
y no a otra.

O al menos pueda
llorar vino.
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Marceline · F
is that portuguese ?
CharlieZ · 70-79, M
@Marceline Hi Marceline.
No, it´s Spanish.
Marceline · F
@CharlieZ ok, i speak neither spanish nor portuguese but for some reason this "felt" more like portuguese... guess my linguistic "feeling" betrayed me
CharlieZ · 70-79, M
This is perhaps of my personal style, when writing poetry.
I use rythms, figures of language and choice of words that may sound a bit like ancient Spanish, wich is a bit nearer to Portugese than those languages are actually.