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I Write Poetry

Head in the clouds
Hope in a grave,
The lies that I took,
The love that I gave,
The darkness creeps in,
As the ember tires,
Haunted by pasts,
Of the once raging fires,
Eyes bright with passion,
Now just ash and tears,
Swallowing the sadness,
Choking on pains and fears,
We tread the razors edge,
Of nightmares and dreams,
Stuck somewhere between,
These whispers and screams,
Surviving in reverse,
Diamonds turned to coal,
A life spent only dying,
A torn and tattered soul,
Hearts growing colder,
With each deepening cut,
Sealing off feelings,
Like windows painted shut,
Sit reading the epitaph,
On the headstone,
In a crowded room,
You still feel alone,
We try to make due,
We cope for our reasons,
Search for angels in others,
To quell our own demons,
We hate all the lies,
We just want what is true,
Though still wear fake smiles,
Insecurities bleed through,
Finding the distance,
Between wants and needs,
A step or a journey,
Both flowers and weeds,
Sundials in shadows,
Still tell of the times,
Of our paths to walk,
The mountains we must climb,
We need to free ourselves,
From the walls that we contrived,
You're not a dead and broken spirit,
But the pieces that survived.
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SW-User
I absolutely love, love, love this..you drug all of the pain and ugliness to the waters edge and then flipped the switch to a positive, healing light. Great job!!
lovingdead · 31-35, M
@SW-User thank you, it sat unfinished for so long b3cause I dreaded ending the negative downward spiral on something negative, (an issue I feel too many of my pieces have) but I think this one turned out ok.
SW-User
@lovingdead You are most welcome and you did. You really did your piece justice as there is nothing better than a surprise ending, esp in such an emotional piece and let's face it; in the end- this.....[quote]You're not a dead and broken spirit,
But the pieces that survived.[/quote]is the reality. Best wishes for many more great pieces.😉

Yes, I know what you mean about pieces sitting unfinished as I have probably 70 or so, it's best to leave them be until your muse assures you. Although I have posted on impulse many times.
lovingdead · 31-35, M
@SW-User my muse has been MIA for a long while now, lately it's just been attempting to ring out the heart, mind, soul, (or whatever happens to hold poetic emotions) and gather a few drops of ink, enough to write something of worth....think I'm going to go read some of yours now.
SW-User
@lovingdead I hope you mean your inner muse. As my most important and valuable lesson, I now know a muse lives within, it's never a person. Mine drives me nuts but I love her.🖤
lovingdead · 31-35, M
@SW-User she seems pretty damn awesome
SW-User
@lovingdead Thank you. She's been there for me and brought forth stronger words than any one person has.😉 I hope you find yours soon. I know you will, mine came when least expected..mine is a theasurus with a heartbeat. Lol. I'm going to read through more of your stuff when I have more time tomorrow and I thank you dearly for checking my stuff out and will respond to all else then too. It was so nice to come across you!!!
lovingdead · 31-35, M
@SW-User he usually only comes out for others...but one day I'm sure I'll cross him