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I Write Poetry

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by: Rob Paquin


Pine green all around
Feet across the ground
Silence has a sound
that reverberates and rebounds






Over rock and root I step
contemplating old regrets
Thinking thoughts I thought I'd left
That have recoiled, but won't abet



And as I walk I shed each thought
regret falls away; uncaught
with a newer feeling; brought
Understandings never sought



Ascending within my mind
As my feet pace while keeping time
A consciousness that climbs
the inner mountains of sublime



And as I wander on
I let my feelings start to spawn
A new day with a new dawn
And a newer picture drawn


~The Snowdog




© TheSnowdog - all rights reserved
SW-User
My favourite line is silence has a sound that reverberates and rebounds.

That line means a lot to me because I have been having a conversation with silence for a while.

I always envy people who are skilled with rhythm and rhyme
HikingMan · 51-55, M
Don't envy us too much. For the most part we're just tortured souls.
SW-User
Oh im all @ tortured soul.

I just struggle with rhythm and rhyme.

My torture is far less aesthetically pleasing...

Check out my less mundane posts and you will see...
Rootstoblossom · 46-50, F
Love that feeling

 
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