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I Write Poetry

I hardly speak of what I know, instead of what you need to hear,
A silent whisper, a furtive word, I utter into your ear.
I stole the bough of happiness.
I won the chance to change your fate.
And from this trough of scrappiness,
Springs forth the seed of hate.

You hath not strength of mind to speak of love you so desire,
So I’ll make haste and burn the bush, then pluck you from the fire.
I’ve lost that want of happiness.
But the power rests in me,
To send his favour back to you,
And content the heart of thee.

This love you need seems absent now but I’ll take it from the shelf,
I grant this gift of such treasured hoards, I save none for myself.

And thy heart begins to melt.
Theo182 · 36-40, M
@Serenitree, thank you. I don't think I have mastered the sonnet by a very very long shot. I think only one person every truly mastered the sonnet; 'How can I compare thee?' :)
Serenitree · F
Nice of you to say, but when i try, i end up not writing anything for weeks, months even. It discourages me and i quit.

I prefer to write what i like and not get frustrated and disgusted.

Anyhow, i never did like old Billy. I stopped trying the day i quit high school.
Serenitree · F
Sonnets are very difficult. You have to get the right number of beats on each line. The rhyme scheme has to be right and.............oh geez. I just know i cant do iy
Theo182 · 36-40, M
@Serenitree, of course you can do it. You can do anything you want to do, if you set your mind to it.
Serenitree · F
Very nice. I have never mastered the sonnet. I like this.
Serenitree · F
You know, its that final line that does it. It is perfect

 
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