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is it good?

Poll - Total Votes: 7
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What is this, this boiling rage and hate?
It is for all the unfairness in this world.
What is this heavy burden upon my back?
The feeling of holding my world on my shoulders.
What is this feeling in my head?
The feeling of confusion and helplessness against the struggle to stop the pain in my world.
What is this longing in my heart?
The wish for a purpose on this earth.
What is this strength in my arms?
The strength that should be used to help those in need.
What is this burning desire in my chest?
The pride that can get a man through the toughest of times.
What is this energy running throughout my body?
The energy to keep standing tall when others break you down.
What is this all-consuming protectiveness?
The feeling of doing everything possible to protect your loved ones.
What is this tenderness?
The feeling of love from those you protect.
What is this comforting embrace?
The feeling of holding those you protect in your arms.
What is this?
The life of a man that would do anything and everything for those he loves.


Tell me what you think will you?
mic11225 · 26-30, M
It didnt impresses me but it wasnt necessarily bad. I find the idea of questioning a condition in your life and then describing it especially in such a straightforward simple way so many times redundant and boring. That is my personal opinion though and much like how people have different tastes physically I hope you don't take offense that i didnt particularly like your flavor of writing. I do like the ideas you are working with though. It is relatable.
bigbear170 · 26-30, M
no its cool. i realize that not everyone will like it. and thanks for your opinion
CrytalLove · 31-35, F
That's really great and inspiring. Don't give up
bigbear170 · 26-30, M
thank you
DreamCandy · 26-30, F
It's good!!

 
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