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~The Golden Age Of Suicide~

All the depression and sadness roams through the Earth like a car in a crash! The devil himself or God's witness is all who'll see, it's a sad little world, that's full of hate yet, that's what we like. It's a sad little world, filled with great-bits of, a piece of love in a bite.

We're the lovers of the peace and we are here to lie! The other deniers who cannot see your true beauty that's really inside. We cry in our dreams and we hope the best. We wish sorrow to others who always lose last...

...the children of poor, the children of rich, any where you go! We are the freaks, we are the monsters inside of our little show. It's shameful how people think thy can handle a true hang from the neck, but the truth is that we can never see what'll happen when we cry out, "what's next?"

We're the lovers of the peace and we are here to lie! The other deniers who cannot see your true beauty that's really inside. We cry in our dreams and we hope for the best. We wish sorrow to others who always lose last...
Enlightener
very painful.I see now,the depression and sadness is crushing people.the SAd world is hated by the collective of the 'sad people',could you please explain Ms, the last line of the first stanza,it sems important,and the first line of the second stanza,...thank you Ms,for writing this.
Saturnalia · 22-25, M
It means we all should feel sorry for the people who weren't strong enough to win their battle in sadness.
Enlightener
what style is this Ms?blank verse perhaps..?its about jealousy.. and that all lose and hypocrisy...it is meant to be read quickly I think.feel free to read my poem 'Delight'.
Saturnalia · 22-25, M
It's actually about sorrow and great agony for the people who take their life away by suicide.
Abhirajagni
Is that written by you?? If yes then great..
Saturnalia · 22-25, M
Thanks!
Abhirajagni
Talent should be appreciated.. :)
savigirl14
Very powerful I love your emotions

 
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