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Moonlight Triolet

Moonlight Triolet

We stand by the window in silver moonlight,
The breeze in our hair and the cool on our skin.
The thunder is gone and it's almost midnight;
We stand by the window in silver moonlight.
I'll tell you a secret right now, if I might--
The rests of our lives are about to begin.
We stand by the window in silver moonlight,
The breeze in our hair and the cool on our skin.

--Harmonium


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ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
Lovely! I like the replay of that line.
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
@Harmonium1923 Exactly. I like it. It’s a callback. I do that in my writing at times, too, but not quite the same way. This was fun. Well done!
Harmonium1923 · 56-60, M
@ChampagneOnIce Thank you! And thank you for starting these up again. I find these more inspiring than the monthly/daily ones from before.
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
@Harmonium1923 Thanks. Yeah, the monthly ones were more difficult for me as well. I hope people participate! Thank you for your poem. :)
Magenta · F
Excellent. Short, sweet, inviting and creative.✨💟
Magenta · F
@Harmonium1923 I really dig that you do!
Harmonium1923 · 56-60, M
@Magenta I’m so glad that COI has started doing these prompts again!
Magenta · F
@Harmonium1923 Ditto. It brought some life back into the place.
I like this a lot.

I want to know the secret.
Whisper it to me.
I am waiting. 😌
candycane · 36-40, F
the sky is dark with twinkling stars
id fly to the moon and then mars

your hair a rainbow of silken tress
your body beautiful in a sun dress

take my hand walk with me
stroll the beach on a deserted sea

stop and linger as i kiss your lips
pull you closer to feel your hips

we lay down in the sand
exploring each other with shakey hand

the crashing waves and seagulls sing
as we stare at each other and cling

my heart and yours beating as one
is a new love born and just begun

candycane

 
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