I Want to Share My Poetry

I recently wrote a poem and could use someone's opinion here it is:

One thousand words
Pouring down on me like holy water
My words wash away the fear of social rejection
The chains of judgement that have been placed upon me are broken
And I am set free
I am a castle of comfidence
In possession of hardships dropped and shattered
Into a million memories swept away
With a quick stroke of strength
My words are my sanctuary
My paper is my Bible
My pen is my soul
My soul spills beauty onto my bible
My soul spills pain, pours love, rains regret
I stare into the mirror of self worth
Once cracked distorted and broken apart
Like a funhouseirror changing my image of self esteem and breaking down my confidence
But now the glue of rehabilitation
Has put me back together
And now it reflects
A beautiful soul
And one thousand words