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A discovery in empathy. Sometimes we can forget....it isn't always about us.

The Doe

Walking through the forest
I could detect a breeze with all my senses
Full of an infinite amount of
Scents
Life
Leaves rustling
Dancing like pixies without a care.

I stopped at a creek
Water chattering
In conversation with birds
With the bustling squirrel in argumentative discussions
With the cacophony and orchestra
Of Nature.

Peace
Suddenly shattered
Heart hammering
Thundering
To the exclusion of all else.
A creature in not five paces
Frozen as I
Forest silent but beating heart.

I had observed these creatures
Many times
From afar
Never so intimate as
This infinite moment
Eyes locked
Muscles relax
A communion settles in.

An ethereal beauty
Female in appearance
It's eyes moist and imploring
Appearing lost
Without direction
Like a child
Without mother.
Never moving
Saying all with eyes
Asking what
Where
Why
Yet my understanding
Limited
Could only return peace
Nonaggression and care.

I had to return to my mother
Her warm essence
Her loving care
For she would worry
I had slipped away
As the young do
To explore
Experience
Learn the things of this world.

But I will always wonder
What life this creature lives
The fears
Thoughts
Wants and needs
I will always remember
As I walked away
And wonder to the mournful sounds
I left behind.
A crying
Of loss and pain
What was in its mind
Was it hurt
Why did it hurt
Did it lose its mother
Or have a mother
Was it lost
Lonely
And afraid?


Perhaps I can never know
Understand
Or empathize
Two different creatures
Sharing a connection
Too different
To fully commune.
I will always wonder
About these creatures
I had overheard
Many times
Called humans......
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fun4us2b · M
The woods are magical and so are these words...
WoodsGirl · F
@fun4us2b The woods are a truth as were these words when I wrote them, in a world I find no peace in.
diablo · 51-55, M
@WoodsGirl "Dance like a pixie without care" is one of my favorite lines, is it yours as well? And I agree, peace seems non-existent in the 🌎 today.
WoodsGirl · F
@diablo "Walking through the forest
I could detect a breeze with all my senses
Full of an infinite amount of
Scents
Life
Leaves rustling
Dancing like pixies without a care.

I stopped at a creek
Water chattering
In conversation with birds
With the bustling squirrel in argumentative discussions
With the cacophony and orchestra
Of Nature."

This part was the best I could do to describe what I see and feel when surrounding myself with the woods. It is a silence full of sound and life, while inside, the silence is deafeningly empty.
WoodsGirl · F
@fun4us2b I wrote this when I was 10, with a few changes in wording since as I learned them. I had been reading and trying to understand many things about my parents when I came across the word empathy. I began to understand this may be the thing missing. The poem is something i wrote, when during this, I started thinking about a time when I actually had this meeting with a doe. It was something that had changed the way I looked at life, but with the idea of empathy fresh on my mind, I began to wonder how that meeting may have looked like from the Does' perspective. And started writing. I will NEVER forget those eyes. The only time in my life I truly felt SEEN.
fun4us2b · M
@WoodsGirl You've been able to capture and express your experience...which is doubly special.
WoodsGirl · F
@fun4us2b Always being schooled through a biblical basis, I really learned to truly express myself through a secret love of poetry. It doesn't matter whether something rhymes, or even has the look of classical poetry. Poetry, to me, is when words create something that defines something bigger than the individual definitions. Sticks and stones will break my bones, but words will never hurt me.....is a lie. The ultimate lie.
fun4us2b · M
@WoodsGirl True - "the pen is mightier than the sword" !!
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