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@Gibbon i had a bad day and most of what i wrote has meanings about my day at work. I have different styles of poetry all throughout my life. I have typed poems for hubby with cute word art and picture art.

Not exactly a Haiku. I don't know what it is. Maybe keep trying.

It was too blatantly sensual not my type of poetry i like mine more obscure in intent and more nature and emotion focused

I like the first three lines.

A string of words
A poem doesn't make
It is the meaning behind the words
That gives verse life
And makes prose or a poem

Where's it at???