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Bleak · 36-40, F
For me, it has been a decade.
justanotherone · 56-60, M
@Bleak I wrote one today too.
I guess this is better than what I wrote yesterday.
But there is no bad writing. Sometimes just less good.
Bleak · 36-40, F
@justanotherone Maybe it’s not that the thoughts and feelings aren’t there; perhaps my mind is simply occupied with something that leaves very little room for anything else. Some things have a way of quietly taking up all the space. I’m hoping that, with time, the words will find their way back to me.
justanotherone · 56-60, M
@Bleak For me, writing it "out" helps a lot.
I usually feel better after it.

val70 · 56-60
No, you're atleast mending :)
justanotherone · 56-60, M
@val70 I know. I just can't do it alone. I need someone to give me some thoughts.
val70 · 56-60
@justanotherone Nature gives that in spades. Either way. Cruelity, love, pain, love, etc. I used to read Dorothy Parker's. She really digged into the world and stayed afloat nevertheless.

justanotherone · 56-60, M
@GoFish I just seen some resemblance
GoFish ·
@justanotherone in what? Saying there there? Lol
justanotherone · 56-60, M
@GoFish yes, without the meaning
Lilnonames · F
i am broken,i am not
just forgot lines i no got
just think a lil and in time
the words will rhyme
justanotherone · 56-60, M
@Lilnonames
So I thought a lil,
then thought some more,
looked for my rhymes
behind the door.

Checked in my pockets,
under the bed,
turns out the poems
were still in my head.

A little bit rusty,
a little off-beat,
but words came wandering
back to my feet.

So am I broken?
Apparently not.

Just needed a rhyme,

…and look what I got.
Ferric67 · M
I have barely written too
Lilnonames · F
haha look what a rhyme did start
words you forgot but not in your heart
there always in there waiting to come out
im glad your no longer in doubt
justanotherone · 56-60, M
@Lilnonames
Well thank you then, you started the flow,
and woke up some rhymes I forgot I know.
They were hiding somewhere, quiet and small,
just waiting for you to give them a call

 
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