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The house poet built.

They say a poem can be a house,
and this house can have one story ,
or many; and there can be one entrance
or many; and those doors can be either locked
or unlocked and there can be keys, or no key,
depending on the poem.

If you find entrance into this poem
you might notice many rooms
that haven't been entered in a very long time and
these rooms might be littered with old memories
of the past, the dent in the corner you made
"playing hide and go seek"

The faded word, "SO" scribbled in crayon under the window
where you used to sleep. The first word you ever wrote

There can be residents living in a poem
but this poem has none. This isn't even the poem.

No, my poem resides up the street to the right of the park
where as a child I'd run and hide. And as a grown man i still visit
from time to time.

The air is empty
And all about, nothing
Stand still lonely child
with your fears and regrets
the moon acknowledges nothing
but time.

Yes my poem is beneath the trees,
my bed a sleeping bag piled among some leaves
There are no rooms here: No one hiding waiting for me.
And the senses are the only harbors of memory, the smell of musty mud,
seeing one earwig devour another earwig. The barking of the neighborhoods dogs
from which you can recognize each and their name; Spike, Oreo, Chip, Blazer...
And you would imagine them running to rescue you with their foaming mouths and
taking the intruder by the neck, shaking their heads and shredding the intruder to little pieces.
But that time has passed. You no longer fear the intruders that creep into the night. No this place gives you nothing but the warm sadness of returning home after being gone for a very long time.
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I like this. Good imagery, visuals, and if I'm wrong tell me, borrows on the idea, a poet can never be trusted. Some understand that to mean, a poet can never be trusted. I see this echoed in words, here. Which I find quite the lie. That's my impression from the introductory words.

The rest to me is a conversation with yourself. Where you remember yourself as a child, trying to see him (the child). That all exists now, especially taken from,
the imagery of you of as a child, 'SO' in crayon
and,
"There can be residents living in a poem
but this poem has none. ......"

The poem then comes back to, you in the adult world, somewhat distanced by the sorrow, remember the child, stating all that have come to intrude you. And how you come, sorrow still being itself, but
"But that time has passed. You no longer fear the intruders that creep into the night. No this place gives you nothing but the warm sadness of returning home after being gone for a very long time."

And are telling yourself to embrace, this sorrow, it always existed; and there is nothing wrong with that; It's home.
Lostpoet · M
@SW-User I think you brought out a deeper more meaningful concept of the poem, but you got it right.

This was about my childhood and always running away to the gully next to my house and sleeping under the overbrush. Everything in the poem is my real childhood though. The word So scribbled in crayon under the window. Is an actually memory of when i was four and my brother told me to spell something and So was the only word I got right and I was so happy about that i wrote it on the wall next to me. 😬my mom wasn't as happy when she saw it though. Everything i put in there was me going back to a certain time in my life and i never really got past it. I still run and hide from everything and everyone.
SW-User
@Lostpoet I wanted to give you my impression, as it reads well. I may have a slight window within from conversation together; but the words also are very depicting without to me.

Sharing that story, of SO, and all you endured just makes it more succinct to me. Thank you for sharing those parts, friend. I will only note, there is an adult reflection in emotion upon the share, which is very well painted. I'm sorry it chases you until this day, I say paint them in words, and heal. ♥️
Lostpoet · M
@SW-User You are right it's me reflecting on that time as an adult.
Lostpoet · M
@SW-User That was a good impression better than one that I could ever come up with.
SW-User
@Lostpoet You wrote the words.. So, you gave me them 🤫