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I Wrote a Poem

just some words i would like to share, inst finished.. just started..

i wanted the tittle to be hoping but doesnt work well for now so i will share my words

[center]i hoped a lot around this year
i hoped to be in i your arms again
i hoped that i could hear
your voice without having pain..

i hoped that i could feel your arms around me
and your beautiful voice hushing my fear
All i wantes as a wish was to see the person i never saw and hoping
to one day see you without a tear..

BUT that cant be possible doing
because God took you to his side..
before we meeting each other
since then i just wanted to hide
because tears.melt down myeyes when i remember you, my beautiful grandmother..馃槶[/center]
RobinPhoenixM
Wow, what a wonderful poem, my dear friend. Despite the sadness of the terrible loss of your grandmother, it麓s a wonderful and very touching poem. You did a great Job by writing it and it麓s a perfect way to honor your beloved granny. :* XXX :* :*
Angelbrat26-30, F
thank you so much robin 馃槉馃槶
RobinPhoenixM
You are welcome :*
Angelbrat26-30, F
@RobinMichael999: thank you still
Michael91142M
A very touching and beautiful written tribute to your grandmother. I am sure, she is very proud of you and watches over you and your loved ones. It breaks my heart, that you both never had the chance to get to know each other XOXOXX
Angelbrat26-30, F
it brokes mine too.. but she watchin me closely on my heart too
PhoenixPhailM
Those are very sweet thoughts. I know you'll continue loving her.
Angelbrat26-30, F
i continue loving her :(
Ballora26-30, F
oh my....that is so wonderful...breaks my heart
Angelbrat26-30, F
:( i am so sorry it wasnt suppose to break your heart ;(
but thank you

 
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