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Into the Woods I Go [I Write Bad Poetry]

Into the woods I go
Amidst chaos and confusion
Drowning amongst
The twisted branches of darkness
Glimmers of light slip through
But remain elusive as ever
I reach for the light
Unable to hold on
For more than a moment
I scream out for help
But no one can hear my cries
Muffled by the dark and silence
The vines threaten to strangle me
As I fight my way through the tangled jungle
Eager to find light
And live again
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firefall · 61-69, M Best Comment
that's really powerful: great thumbnail of depression besieging your soul.
abooklover · 56-60, F
@firefall Thank you.

496sbc · 36-40, M
Love this did u write it
496sbc · 36-40, M
@abooklover wow amazing ur amazing i cant write this way
abooklover · 56-60, F
@496sbc Thanks so much.
496sbc · 36-40, M
@abooklover ur welcome

 
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