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I Like To Write Poetry

Had I known......

If I had known you'd be gone I'd have held a little longer
Kissed a little harder
Loved a little stronger....
Gave in a little more to your needs and desires
Done all I could to keep our love a hot fire
Would have spoken my devotion until my throat was sore
When we talked late at night I would listened a little more
Would have acted quicker
Faster been smarter
Simply put love I'd have tried a little harder
Had I known you'd be gone I'd have held a little closer....
Nicer I'd be acting
Woulda coulda shoulda...but alas it didn't happen
emptythrone · 31-35, M
and she's gotten married since then.....I applaud the man for being able to win the heart of such a beautiful soul, she was right for me.....and sadly since then none have even come close
emptythrone · 31-35, M
thank you, and the thing is when I had her I was so grateful truly happy and let her know how I felt about her...even wrote my vows...which I remember verbatim, I'll never forget....
emptythrone · 31-35, M
yeah that was my fiancee..wonderful woman....but her mom didn't like the idea of....blacks and whites being together
emptythrone · 31-35, M
now thats foul....when I was blessed to have..Miriam I forsook all others because I KNEW we were getting married
Serenitree · F
I can relate. Beautifully written.
Aww I had a black fiancé once before I got married but in my defence he was already married and didn't tell me so I left and married someone else and he got mad.. And I was like wft you're married yourself.. But whatever.. That was dumb and like a dozen years ago too :( sigh
Alas! *sigh* :(
Oh.. That's too bad that some people are so superficial still.. (It's dumb and wrong imo) :(
SW-User
Been there. We live and learn.

 
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