I Like to Write Poems

Have all candles blown?
Have all feelings flown?
Have all little love of mine... gone?
Oh! what have i done?
What have i done?

Are you happy now?
For you smile somehow
Are you glad i don't talk anymore?
You don't realise how hard it is
to live without you
the one who i loved so much
And you talk no more
You smile no more
You're near no more
You're gone..
Oh! what have i done?
What have i done?

You're gone and i'm gone
the world's gone the smile's gone
all the feeling's gone
all the memories gone
every time i loose...
But now i'm done
Now i'm done
I'm done.....

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paulie138

Well done! Powerful emotions here. I like that the poem ends with decision :))

d0vev · M

thank you very much for appreciating it... poetry and arts is the only way i can express the fire inside me...

paulie138

I know that feeling. It can be both powerful and lonely, but there are many others around in a similar boat. Finding them can help, but it's nice just to know there are other people like you in this world.

d0vev · M

its nice to meet someone like you...

paulie138

Thanks for the compliment. I feel the same way. One thing about Ep: you can find many people here with whom you have much in common. Just a little looking around. Just like the rest of life :))