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Let’s Make a Deal by Mario Benedetti - Translated from Spanish.

(For the one she know she is).



Partner
you know
you can count
on me
not up to two
or up to ten
but count
on me

if some time
shows
that I look into your eyes
and you recognize
a streak of love
coming from mine
don’t alert your guns
nor think it’s delirium
in spite of the streak
or perhaps because it exists
you can count
on me

if other times
you find me
shy without motive
don’t think it’s feebleness
you can count on me
the same
but let’s make a deal
I would like to count
on you

it’s very beautiful
to know that you exist
one feels alive
and when I say this
I mean counting
even if it’s up to two
even if it’s up to five
not just so that you respond
hastily to my aid
but to know
for certain
that you know that you can
count on me.
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This is so beautiful...

Thank you for sharing it with me...

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CharlieZ · 70-79, M
@Soossie Sharing it with you it´s the right thing to do.🌹
@CharlieZ

🤗🤗❤😘
CharlieZ · 70-79, M
rubenalfons · 46-50, M
Mmmm Bruno Mars, could he have been inspired by this poem for his song titled "count on me"? He says almost the same thing surreptitiously

 
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