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The Road That Waited

Beneath silver skies and a setting sun,
blue Subarus fade, one by one.
Their taillights burn in the falling night,
then vanish slowly out of sight.

I have wandered far, I have wandered blind,
searching for something I could never find.
Through nameless roads and shadows deep,
I chased the promise the darkness keeps.

Yet even lost, I somehow knew
there was a road that would lead me through
a quiet path, unseen, unshown,
that felt like somewhere I had always known.

Perhaps every turn that led me astray,
every broken road and wasted day,
was guiding my feet through dark and doubt
toward the path I was meant to find out.

Now beneath the silver sky,
as the final light begins to die,
I find the road that waited for me
the road laid down before time came to be
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GoFish · 41-45, F
@GoFish poetry is word porn for me. I love it
GoFish · 41-45, F
Bravo! *Claps hands* 👏
HikingMan · 56-60, M
This stanza was excellent:

“ I have wandered far, I have wandered blind,
searching for something I could never find.
Through nameless roads and shadows deep,
I chased the promise the darkness keeps.”

The entire rhyme is a gem but that stanza sticks out.
@HikingMan I’m sitting here in the parking lot of dollar general. Watching the sun set. A blue Subaru was next to me. Those were the catalyst. The rest had been brewing in me for a long time now. Maybe six months
HikingMan · 56-60, M
@Quoththeraven The beauty of rhyme isn’t in the words themselves.
It’s in the way they move other people.

Your rhyme was a thing that moved things in me and I’m glad that I read it.

Enjoy the setting of today.
May tomorrow bring you newer thoughts and endless beauty

 
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