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I Like Writing Poetry


I cannot do this anymore,
Pretend to love you forevermore,
You've hurt me deeper than you should,
You didn't care about how or why,
Don't seem to care even as I sit here and cry,
I don't understand how you could,
I'm furious with you I'm almost to the point I hate your very being,
You've shown me thing's I'd wished I'd never known.
Your words, action's all speak loud and clear.
I'm not capable of giving you another ounce of myself or my love,
You've drained me mentally, physically, emotionally
I'm done I'm beat,
You've won.
AndyC · 22-25, F
Good job! Your poem reminds me of Manuel Acuña. A Latin poet, your style is similar to his.

Great!
SweetSeptember · 36-40, F
Never heard of him. Thanks glad you enjoyed it
MrsP15 · 41-45, F
That's very deep honey and sad 🙁
SweetSeptember · 36-40, F
@MrsP15 remember that this isn't about us babe. I promise. 😍

 
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