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Falling in Love - Haiku

Fell in the pool of love — a hundred hands reached for me, I grew gills, stayed deep.

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Mollypop13 · 18-21, F

First line 6 syllables

Good effort though

Renkon · 41-45, M

@Mollypop13 Thank you. I missed that part completely.

SW-User

beautiful and felt

SW-User

yours?

Renkon · 41-45, M

@SW-User Yes, it is.

LunadelobosIAMTHEDRAGON

Neat.

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