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Falling in Love - Haiku

Fell in the pool of love —
a hundred hands reached for me,
I grew gills, stayed deep.
Renkon
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6 replies 60 views Oct 15, 2025
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SW-User
beautiful and felt
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Mollypop13 · 16-17, F
First line 6 syllables

Good effort though
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Renkon · M
@Mollypop13 Thank you. I missed that part completely.
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SW-User
yours?
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Renkon · M
@SW-User Yes, it is.
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LunadelobosIAMTHEDRAGON · F
Neat.
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