Haiku: Soft Above Your Grief

If I burn, let go,
Shape me as a silver cloud,
Soft above your grief.

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Magenta · F

Ooh very nice.
I love haiku's and once upon a time constructed them. I liked the mental challenge of them.

Renkon · M

@Magenta Why stop? I would love to read one by you.

Magenta · F

@Renkon I lost my inspiration and spark to write much now.

Renkon · M

@Magenta What will it take to rekindle that spark?

EndlessHorizon · 46-50, M

Beautiful.

Renkon · M

hunkalove · 70-79, M

Nice one!

Renkon · M

@hunkalove Thank you.

iamthe99 · M

@Renkon Here's one I found:

There was a young man
From Cork, who got limericks
And haikus confused.

Renkon · M

@iamthe99 That's a good one.

akindheart · 61-69, F

a poet and a writer!! good combo.

Renkon · M

@akindheart Thank you. I really appreciate your words of encouragement.

akindheart · 61-69, F

@Renkon you are a good egg on this site...😄

Simulation · 31-35New

Clouds drifting in sky.
Higher than human sorrow,
crimson in the dusk.

Renkon · M

@Simulation That’s a good one.

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