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Sand between my toes
Ocean covers my ankles
Seashell findeth me

#Haiku Poetry

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Lilymoon · F

I like Haiku poems
The way they roll off the tongue
Gives my brain a boost

Canuckle · 51-55, M

@Lilymoon Thanks for the feedback. I tried to be creative with this one and play on words. I am not a poet.

Lilymoon · F

@Canuckle I used to write a lot of Haiku's.... they were crap but it was fun and challenging.

Canuckle · 51-55, M

@Lilymoon I tried to play on words with the first letter row and the last line.

SOS - Help
Seashell findeth me
See she’ll findeth me

I thought it was creative, but I’m second guessing myself. 😂 Good thing I have other opportunities to write Haiku’s 😂

Lilymoon · F

@Canuckle it's actually really good. 😊

Canuckle · 51-55, M

@Lilymoon Thanks I appreciate the feedback.