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Write me a haiku


Write me a haiku,
About anything you choose.
Just write a haiku.
SHREKPage Best Comment
she loves great music
such beautiful eyes she has
our queen of the nerds
QueenOfTheNerds · 41-45, F
[image]@SHREKPage
QueenOfTheNerds · 41-45, F
@SHREKPage 🤗
Thank you very much.
Not even submitted late. 🤭
You get Best Comment.
@QueenOfTheNerds That miss...is epic. You rock!!🥰

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QueenOfTheNerds · 41-45, F
Montanaman · M
@QueenOfTheNerds A breath of fresh air 😊😇🙏💕
Sometimes, a haiku
just doesn't make sense to me
refrigerator
@PhoenixPhail You captured the bizarre ones well!
Notsimilar · 31-35, F
I love to eat chicken
Fried, baked, suateed, roasted, BBQd, broiled, smoked
I love to eat chicken



I'll see myself out 😂
@Notsimilar Syllables, not words...

looks like 6/11/6; here's an example:

Yes, I like chicken
prepared in various ways;
I will eat them all.
Harmonium1923 · 51-55, M
Asleep in my lap
My dear aging calico
Offers purrs of love
QueenOfTheNerds · 41-45, F
@Harmonium1923 Awww. 🤗
Coppercoil · M
Lips made for this kiss
Finger tips reaching for skin
Nothing else like this
Canuckle · 51-55, M
Sand beneath my toes
Waves across my ankles now
I am dreaming sigh
Lilymoon · F
I used to love writing Haiku's ... haven't done it in ages.
I want some cheesecake
I really want some right now
I want some cheesecake
QueenOfTheNerds · 41-45, F
Canuckle · 51-55, M
Lost in her blue eyes
Hair luxuriously soft
Meow meow hiss
QueenOfTheNerds · 41-45, F
@Canuckle How’d I miss this?!
Canuckle · 51-55, M
@QueenOfTheNerds it’s okay I was going to write and write and write until you noticed. Lol I like this story board.
CCMorgan · 51-55, M
Wind whistles through trees

Winter’s cacophony breeze

Eerie thoughts join in
QueenOfTheNerds · 41-45, F
Paperhearts · 61-69, F
Your eyes your voice haunt
In my dreams you are with me Impossible wish
lovingdead · 31-35, M
hearts in the shadows,
shining like stars in the night,
love born from the flames.
LeeInTheNorthWoods · 70-79, F
Where are you going?
Now is the time to stay home.
Close the door. Sit down.
Coppercoil · M
Open and alive
Trusting the feelings that guide
Inside things are right.
Coppercoil · M
Where are you tonight
Maybe there is more to life
Searching deep inside
SW-User
On the summer night
How a pointed, dim star sings
while watching the guide
Coppercoil · M
What are our lives for
Dreaming away our best days
No more chances left
SW-User
was asked for haiku
can wisdom be found in poem
minimalism
QueenOfTheNerds · 41-45, F
@SW-User
MrFinch · M
Some are creative
Others are not creative
I fit in last group.
XDHyperGirlXD1 · 31-35, F
I want to eat breakfast lunch and dinner not do SW homework 🥺
She roamed freely
Barefoot and wild
Mother natures child


Not even sure if that is a haiku 😬
@QueenOfTheNerds Its the middle line is it?
QueenOfTheNerds · 41-45, F
@Ozymandiaz
Lines one and two.
Line one should have 5 syllables, line 2 should have 7.
@QueenOfTheNerds I will change it up a little and see if i can fix it
Wind blowing darkness.

Trees dancing enchanted bough.

Water falls silent.
@QueenOfTheNerds
I haven't written a haiku in a long time.
I hope i got it right.
QueenOfTheNerds · 41-45, F
@Onestarlitnight It’s perfect! ☺️
@QueenOfTheNerds
Thank you 😊
SW-User
the cat snores aloud

concerns of sleep apnea

beautiful and wise
QueenOfTheNerds · 41-45, F
@SW-User
SW-User
@QueenOfTheNerds Beanik cats? I'm impressed.
QueenOfTheNerds · 41-45, F
@SW-User 😸
ServantOfTheGoddess · 61-69, M
You did not comment
on my previous haiku
so no more for you 😛
QueenOfTheNerds · 41-45, F
@ServantOfTheGoddess
I am so sorry
I ran out of snapping gifs
But I still loved it
♥️
ServantOfTheGoddess · 61-69, M
@QueenOfTheNerds
Oh well in that case!
My musing in syllables
shall begin again.
Ambroseguy80 · 51-55, M
The Queen of the Nerds
Has a great sense of humor
Let’s start the music!
Boleuskas · M
love between us is, speech and breath. loving you is a long river running.
Coppercoil · M
Loneliness comes in
I pretend I don't see it
It never leaves me
QueenOfTheNerds · 41-45, F
[image]@Coppercoil

When you are lonely,
Reach out your hand, you’ll see:
You are not alone. ♥️
Canuckle · 51-55, M
Heavens opened wide
Sun beamed down on her soft skin
Warmth again within
DanteD · 51-55, M
I love you baby!
You're beautiful and sexy.
I love you baby!
QueenOfTheNerds · 41-45, F
@DanteD [image]
Expectant pause, then--
Colors, sound explode in Light!
Sunrise renews day.
Harmonium1923 · 51-55, M
Trout season begins
And wise fish seek warm waters
While anglers shiver.
Lostpoet · M
Water droplets on
a blade of grass collect water for
Young Aphids to drink
fun4us2b · M
Too Late Best Comment
Given away by Nerd Queen
I will try Harder
NodandaWink · 51-55, M
Morning sun rises
Fiery sky radiates
Hope is born anew
ninalanyon · 61-69, T
You wrote a haiku
You wrote a haiku so well
I like your haiku!
comfi1 · 61-69, M
I wonder why that
Birds no longer come in to
My garden anymore
Jlhzfromep · M
The sea is calling
It is that time of the year
I must go to her
Sequoia51 · 70-79, M
Your Sweet Lower Lips

Welcome My Wet Kisses and

Open At My Touch
Canuckle · 51-55, M
Passion wild and free
Racing to avoid the end
Mania is me
Coppercoil · M
She dreams in music
She sleeps so she can listen
He watches her dance
writertom88 · 36-40, M
The shampoo bottle -
Hope it’s not conditioner -
Just pass it to me!
In the shame garden
a patch of carnal seedlings
springs open shyly
ServantOfTheGoddess · 61-69, M
Oh Queen of the Nerds
You don't need any princes --
Only Basho's frog.

(http://www.bopsecrets.org/gateway/passages/basho-frog.htm)
SW-User
Haiku is hard
The end

Wut

Sorry
xmedleft · 51-55, M
What you have constructed here is actually what's called an American Sentence.
Some debate whether haiku can be made in any language other than Japanese because of the relationship between syllables and whole words or concepts.
BUT ALSO Haiku are supposed to have some references to seasons
AND a thing referred to as a "cut word", which in Japanese describes a word that shows a change or shift -- can also denote that change in terms of growth, absorbing experiences or learning.

This is why there are masters at haiku, and why Americans can whip them out a dozen an hour and be like "Oh, God the biggest challenge is in seeing what the hell the challenge is."
The one that shows the format in the illstration may be one if open is the cut word...
HumanEarth · 56-60, M
I'm no writer. I'm a fixer and a builder

You want a machine fixed or built. I'm your guy. Writing poetry is the farest thing from me.

Oh you want me to go after that creep that fucked you over. I been known to kick some ass to in my day as well
DeluxedEdition · 26-30, F
Weed
Now
To get food
Freeranger · M
you delicate scarlet river-bottom flower
magnificent array of Summer
nature washes over me
seas's power to brilliant flower
Muthafukajones · 46-50, M
You know Japanese words typically only have one or two syllables so it’s far easier for them

 
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