I Write Haikus

Monsters are in vogue
We place them on pedestals
Surprised when they bite

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Magenta · F

The higher we place
The more painful the fall down
For them and for us

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Magenta · F

@Serpico I was using yours as inspiration. 😘

Magenta · F

@Serpico Truth in your words, per usual.

Serpico · 51-55, M

@Magenta I am flattered. Thank you my dear. Kind as always... and a creative artist.

CereBellum

A [b]haiku[/b] needs 5 words on the first line; 7 on second and 5 on third. Just FYI.

Serpico · 51-55, M

@CereBellum Yes my first line is 5, second 7 and third 5.

Serpico · 51-55, M

@CereBellum And its Syllables not words. I think you are confused

Invocations · F

Are we really though...surprised.

Serpico · 51-55, M

@Invocations I suppose you make a good point. We place gods on pedestals and they always bite. Even the most devout get their asses kicked by their "god".

Invocations · F

@Serpico love being one of those gods for example. Anyway, cool haiku. Not that I know jack shit about haikus but just saying.

Paliglass · 41-45, F

So true

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