I Like Making Haiku Poems

Instead

Might ocean deny

The sleepy unknown dreamer

Take her or wake her?

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Sorrowfulgaze · 46-50, M

Love the ambiguity.

MayaHope · 41-45, F

The secret of a haiku/senryu is ambiguity! @Sorrowfulgaze

Sorrowfulgaze · 46-50, M

@MayaHope True enough but hard to pull off.

MayaHope · 41-45, F

I’m so ambiguous in my days to day existence they are quite enjoyable to play with! @Sorrowfulgaze