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xmedleft · 51-55, M
Well the 1st thing is that you cannot "accomplish" Haiku in any language other than Japanese -- the lingual structure is that specific. The thing that English speakers write is often referred to as American Haiku or American Sentence.
You probably know the basic of 17 syllables; 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables... but then there are 2 additional variations;
1) you can write about something and in the process refer to a season and at least 1 word has to evoke the feelings of that season
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2) You can write about yourself/experiences/thoughts, but must use a thing called a cut-word, which makes a sudden change of tone where you demonstrate growth, learning or personal improvement.
You probably know the basic of 17 syllables; 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables... but then there are 2 additional variations;
1) you can write about something and in the process refer to a season and at least 1 word has to evoke the feelings of that season
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2) You can write about yourself/experiences/thoughts, but must use a thing called a cut-word, which makes a sudden change of tone where you demonstrate growth, learning or personal improvement.