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I Write Dark Poetry

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As I sit inside this echo, listening to my mind, I find
things don't ever stay the same, and I can't take back the time.

Sleep, it isn't coming. Peace it isn't there, nor here
Darkness; for me comes running, as I wrap up inside my fear.

There was a time when nothing mattered, everything was fine; In line.
But things don't ever stay the same, and I can't take back the time.

Stare into my eyes you'll see, in those windows to my soul, so cold
a coward borne of misery, and a man that grows too old.

Things don't ever stay the same, I can't take back the time
I'm sorry that it is this way, inside my tortured mind. I climb.



The Snowdog
*Claps...Brilliant!

''Sleep, it isn't coming. Peace it isn't there, nor here
Darkness; for me comes running, as I wrap up inside my fear.'' Is a brilliant line :) Very inspirational :D
HikingMan · 51-55, M
Thanks. This one is fairly old. Probably written about 6 or 7 years ago.
Your welcome! :) Just because it's old, doesn't mean its any less relevant or not as good...Its still kicking! :)
Rootstoblossom · 46-50, F
I read this many times. Love it. Misery certainly can turn us into cowards and trap us within our own tortured mind
HikingMan · 51-55, M
This rhyme was completely thrilled by your multiple readings. I was thrilled by the comment.

Thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed it.
HikingMan · 51-55, M
Thank you.

 
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